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Tuesday, 29 November 2016

My descriptive writing

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I went to take my first step on the  wire it felt  like I was in hell.The sweat ran down my body like a splashing waterfall.The canyon was huge and deep.  The fall wouldn't be painful for my death. My body felt so tense I couldn't move. My confidence dropped suddenly as I reached the middle. I looked down at the far drop below and thought I am not going to make it.The gusts of wind blew my hair and chilled my face as if I was in a freezer.The blazing sun shone down on me as if I was in a frypan. Each step felt like torture. My body was trembling like I was watching a horror movie. I kept on walking keeping my balance like a flamingo balances on one leg. I took my last step off the terrifying wire feeling relieved  that I didn't die.

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